7X Science homework
what should be included in your power point presentation
max-and-owens-presentation katie-and-lauras-presentation
Your task is to view the 2 power points that I have posted and write 1 positive comment about each one and 1 improvement that could be made to each one.
Due 29th January.
on January 23rd, 2009 at 7:06 pm
I thought that max and owen powerpiont was very good
I thought the brain storm was good
but i think they could of changed the colour of the writing to make it stand out more
on January 24th, 2009 at 9:50 am
Laura and Katie, Yours was
Really good… I really liked the good pictures and scientific words used and i also thought the background consistancy made it look very proffesional.
But their were a few mistakes such as:
1) On you sports people bit you wrote: Joe Tsonga is a tennis player is a french tennis player (dosent make sense) And you also wrote he is very well none (known) There.
2)When explaining how friction effects your sports person you wrote frition instead of friction
Other then that it was awesome!
4 and a half stars!!!
on January 24th, 2009 at 9:53 am
Miss salih do i have to review my own or do i only have to do one?
Email me at: Captainmax@hotmail.co.uk with the answer please miss.
Thanks,
Max, 7x
on January 24th, 2009 at 10:57 am
Max and Owen’s power point is really good because it is full of infomation, it is also colourfull and exciting.
The only not so good thing is that its a bit random at times!
on January 24th, 2009 at 10:57 am
Max and Owen’s power point is really good because it is full of infomation, it is also colourfull and exciting.
The only not so good thing is that its a bit random at times!
on January 24th, 2009 at 11:49 am
i loved laura and katies. the colour and pictures were amazing and i want to know how to make the pictures come on like that. the only bad thing is there was one spare page at the begining but appart from that it was really good!
on January 24th, 2009 at 11:53 am
max and owens was really cool. i liked the coulour but the one bad thing was there was no title. but appart from that it was great! i liked the cartoons
on January 24th, 2009 at 6:00 pm
i think that laura’s and katie’s power point is really good they finished all of it and there was pictures to show things and it made it easy to understand what every slide showed.
max and owen’s was good as well they explained what a balanced diet was and the 7 food groups, in some of the slide they didn’t finish it but they when to another slide,i know it could have been better if they finished it.
on January 25th, 2009 at 10:35 am
max and owens
your prestantation was good and i liked your food man but you could chnage the colour of the writting welldone.
on January 25th, 2009 at 10:42 am
katie and laura
your presantation was good and i liked the pictures but i thought you needed to explain what a balanced diet is.
on January 25th, 2009 at 3:23 pm
I think that Max and Owens was really good apart from there wasnt like an Introduction page saying what the presentation was actually about and plus it was a bit unfinished.
Laura and Katies was really good as well but on the Balanced Diet page I think maybe you could of added a bit more to it.
on January 25th, 2009 at 4:25 pm
i think that laura and katie’s presentation was really good. i have learnt lots about food and forces on it.
but you might want to check on the tennis players section.
there is a part that doesnt make sense
on January 25th, 2009 at 6:50 pm
I think that both of the presentations are really good. I really liked the colour of the background on laura and katie’s presentation.
But i think that both of the presentations needs a bit more information.
on January 26th, 2009 at 5:59 pm
max and owens presentation was good. i liked the they really stood out and it was filled with lots of information but there was no title at the begining it who it was by.
on January 26th, 2009 at 6:14 pm
lauras and katies presentation was realy cool the pictures was super and they finished all their slides the only bad thing about it was that it had needed more info on the sport star page. but otherwise it was super!!
on January 26th, 2009 at 8:47 pm
I think that Laura and Katie’s presentation is FAB! It told me alot about food, forces and the sport stars and had a good use of pictures. I think that on one of the slides you couldn’t read the pink writting because the background was pink.
on January 26th, 2009 at 8:57 pm
I think Max and Owen’s presentation was really cool! I liked the use of pictures especially food man. I think they should have put a title on the first page though.
on January 27th, 2009 at 5:09 pm
I liked the food man at the end of Max and Owen’s powerpoint. They needed more titles on some of the pages.
I particularly liked how Laura and Katie laid out the menu for the sports men. I think you missed out water in the 7 food group part because you only listed 6 food groups and your title says 7.
on January 27th, 2009 at 5:23 pm
www about katie’s and laura’s that they said what ricket is
and that they put pictures.
EBI if they put the food group water and if they put a picture of food prymaid
www about max’s and owen’s that he putted pictures on top
every food group.
EBI he put the food group about fibreand if he started with a title.
on January 27th, 2009 at 6:53 pm
i think max’s power point was good
i think they could change the writing colour.
on January 27th, 2009 at 8:43 pm
max and owens powerpoint was very good
they explaned what forces there are and told you about the food groups but there were some slides with nothing on it and it didn’t realy explain what the forces do.
on January 27th, 2009 at 8:55 pm
Katie and lauras power point was good because they showed you the 7 food groups and what they do they also had some good pictures that explain what the forces do but they didn’t tell you about there sports people very much and i think they should make there sports person information longer.
on January 28th, 2009 at 1:56 pm
WWW Max and owen’s powerpoint was good because they showed you the 7 food groups and what they do they also had some good pictures EBI they repeted the same pictures of the skater boarder.
on January 28th, 2009 at 2:01 pm
i think lauras & kaite powerpoint was good
because they showed the 7 food groups and explain how
they help you & made very colourful
on January 28th, 2009 at 4:43 pm
I thought that laura’s amd mine were very good but we hadalot of spelling mistakes. such as:
1. Air resident
2. balance diet should of been balanced
3. joe tsonga is a tennis player is a french tennis player and is good
4. none (known)
Max you spelt doesn’t wrong you wrote (dosent)
on January 28th, 2009 at 5:23 pm
i thnk maxes and owens presentations were very good because they explained in detail the 7 food groups very well and put good pictures in the presentation to explain wht will happen if u dont get the right food groups.
on January 28th, 2009 at 9:43 pm
max and owens: the best bit of the presentation was the infomation on the sports person i think that they should have put more pictures in on there sports person and made the back ground more colourful
on January 28th, 2009 at 9:50 pm
laura and katie
I thought that it was very good and the stood out very well and there pictures were bright and colourful if you were to improve it the only thing i would say you need to do is to explain about your sports person a bit more
on January 29th, 2009 at 8:42 am
i think that the cloures where nice and bright it was eye catching but the pictures where fuzzy
on January 29th, 2009 at 11:16 am
i thingk that maxs and owens on was verry descrittive and there was verry scientific and it was verry good.
penny7x
on January 29th, 2009 at 6:54 pm
katies and lauras
i think katies and laruas was really good because the colars were good and the text.
they could of on there sports person they should of put more text
on January 29th, 2009 at 7:05 pm
maxs and owens
the food chart was really good it gave you loads of information about the food groups. and the information about there sports person was really good and i really liked your food man. the bad thing about it was that some of the coulars of the text was not clear to see but over all it was the best slide show in the class probly………..
on January 29th, 2009 at 7:22 pm
just to add to my last comment on the skateborder you did it twice you should of check it. before showing it .see you torrow everyone espailly ezinwa.
on January 29th, 2009 at 10:51 pm
Ezinwa and Kyle can you please re-submit your comments as I deleted them by mistake, sorry.
Miss Salih.
on January 30th, 2009 at 8:40 am
shade said that the picture is very good and interesting they are simple to read and understandable
on January 30th, 2009 at 4:48 pm
I think that laura and katies was a girly presentation but alsome!! I better stop taking be for i bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
on February 9th, 2009 at 5:17 pm
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on June 24th, 2009 at 9:07 pm
we could be alone because we have not seen any form of life or that there might be life on venus or pluto or even mars.